For myself in particular, given my "contribution" to the game, it was interesting to see what Goddess Maker's Allia, Celine, and Freda characters would look like when run into an AI generation model that transforms them in stages based on their first form.
Freda in particular is amusing because she was not intended to keep her shrimp form as she ascends, but rather be all sexy and busty in a crime boss kimono, paralleling somewhat to her younger sister, Marissa’s, body.
I can recommend you actual books if you wanna read or when it comes to indie video games with rich story check out Fear and hunger, Blasphemous , Darkest dungeons , Pathologic and the list goes on. ( No Ai included)
Given all the comments of bad writing, it’s making me feel a sort of parental obligation that I should rewrite it myself since pretty much everything else apart from the AI art assets is my work.
A counterfeit Goddess Maker should at least be competent to read, even if it does take shortcuts, especially as this diverging project remains associated with my own.
So my offer of reconciliation is you let me handle the coding and writing, and you can develop the art coinciding with the plot structure you have in mind.
It'll probably be for the best to play to our strengths.
partially because im not a native english speaker, partially because this wasnt a very well planned project and went through a few dozen big changes in story, partially cus first iterations of dialogue were almost fully ai written, its got a bit of an absolute mess of a dialogue even after a lot of manual rewriting, future stuff is a lot more planned so it shouldnt have such issues, Writing has always been and still is its weakest point by far and Ive spent a ton more time fixing stuff than I wouldve if I knew how to do it properly in the first place.
Ill fix that one up and go through another skim to try to find others, I prioritized main characters when rewriting so hopefully those have a better standard.
I take no offense to it, it can hurt a bit but not because of what you said, more so because its true, dont worry ive gotten a lot worse and I appreciate a lot any feedback people can bring, since I actually want to continue improving this (you wouldnt believe how bad first version was), if youve got any other please let me know, and thank you.
So I'm pretty lost on what exactly happened in the dom route. Like what exactly caused the thing that happened to chad to happen? I never made the cannister (I don't remember making it) and somehow I still get the dom ending with chad getting the same result if I had made it. Then they say she'll just undo it, I think, but then nothing happens after that.
there was a bit of a mess with dom route having combined with normal there, shrink cannister is not needed in it, in very rough words you just drain chad of all shes got, but your body cant sustain it so you just have fun while it lasts, ive already fixen up 2 or 3 scenes that got mixed up there but thats another one that needs fixing, Dom route got added like on the side of normal route so its the one with the most complaints and most issues, id be thankful if you told me what other places were confusing.
I see, I had added a bit of a buildup a few mins ago with the girlfriend mentioning how she seems to loose a bit of what she gained during growth, you getting some growth from her in certain scenes and rex also growing off of her and such, so, she kind of is a kind of a huge well of growth, who has a certain amount of almost subconcious control over her growth and its transmission, it also makes her a lot more impulsive the bigger she gets, the idea was that because of the events that happened beforehand she kind of just let you subconsiously suck it all out, you have been asserting control over her, but your body doesnt have the capacity (yet) to hold all of it, things like the training programme and the research were so you can artificially atune yourself to the growth but it doesnt match hers and so you cant keep it, its definitely a bit obscure, I focused more on the "sexyness" of the scene rather than a fully logical sysem there specially because dom route is more built onto the normal one, its meant to be an alternative route but ill add this to the list of issues and think something up.
Ah, I see. I remember seeing the mentions of Rex also growing. I just figured that was like an additional effect of having sex with Chad, her cum causing people to grow as well when inside them and not that it was Chad giving away some of her growth/size in the process. I can see what you mean now though.
Well she gives it away by the "fluids" but it has different effect depending on the person and she has like I said an almost subconcious control of it, ill expand more on how it all works on later parts, its not meant to be all discovered rn
I am so confused for the whole game. I was doing the dom route and when asked to make the thing that reverses her the topmost option was to brew a supressant cannister and there was not a single option to do at the board anymore. Then Candie was there and it seems like I lost and then immedately after I somehow had the thing that reverses her? I think it's very confusing adn the wording of the dialogue doesn't help that one bit
Ahhh, there is indeed a confusing way which is that if you fail a condition on the Dom route you get taken to the normal route and we'll the dialogue is from the normal route so it's gonna make less sense
Also made me realize that I fucked up on a lot of the options menus and skipped part of the convos by accident. both should now be fixed, it was indeed merging weirdly into normal route
I did end up draining chad in the same run though, I don't think I switched over to the regular run. I think I am more confused by trying to make the supressant and then it telling me I never used any because I don't have them somehow even tough I am sure I made a bunch of them
I can't for the life of me figure out how to research "Raise the limit" in the regular path. I don't have any research options at the bench, and I only have the usual recipes (suppressant, regular, super, bust) in the Brew menu.
Do you think you could lock certain images like the bathroom scene till characters reach the size in the images? feels weird to see them tall when in game they are really short.
How do you get to the second ending in Normal? I've beaten Dom, but I don't how how to finish Normal without using suppressant. Or am I supposed to just not make suppressant for several weeks?
That doesn't seem to be possible? I tried Research > brew nothing > completely empty out the shelf (like the branch where Chad regrows), but your partner still secretly brews a suppressant anyways and you have to use it. And if I don't research then the scene never triggers, unlike Dom route where I could skip the research?
Oddly, I ended up getting the ending through the scene viewer after getting the above again, which DID acknowledge I had no suppressants in inventory.
well that's a bug, just like it's still not possible to lose the rematch as the boost from the day before puts you at 198cm hopefully it will get fixed in time
I finally finished the game, and overall, I liked it. The fetish content was great and particularly I love that this game has hyper content - games that focus on fmg usually doesn’t have a giantess the size of a building and it is very rare to see the combination of fmg + gts+ futa in a fetish game.
As for AI images, they are not perfect but pretty decent for a passion project and also there is a lot of CG and that is great. Also there is still too much of horrible AI writing, which makes it difficult to understand what is going on. Sometimes, because of AI writing, instructions of what to do next are unclear. The writing needs to be redone because any human-made writing would be better than AI.
Overall, this project is great, it is great that the dev is trying to diverge from the Goddess Maker and to create something unique and I would love to see how massive characters will grow in next parts but for now part 1 needs a lot of polishing and a full replacement of AI writing.
Also here are some suggestions that came to my mind:
It would be great if it would be possible see height (or also some other parameters) of other characters: either there would be an option to see measurements of all characters on the special tab or the player could only see the height of characters who are present during current scene
The game could have a special tab where the player would be able to check the progress and requirements for secondary quests (maybe something like the ladder for the main quest).
Also the gallery needs hints that would help player to explore all routes and find all CG in the game because without any hints that will be too difficult .
I wish all the best for the developer and I hope that this project won’t be abandoned and will be brought to completion because it has a lot of potential
its say i lose but i dont have any other dialogue i need to restart all the game ?
and i wonder if their any traducted version because its kinda hard to understand how i can grow up when its say 2meter max i dont know if someone can help me
Im.making game clearer but if you loose, you don't actually loose, it's just a bad ending, you can continue playing the game but you will get different scenes if you win
It's promising, the idea is great, the activities pretty fun, and the growth is nicely done for purely AI images.
But the writing is very bad. It is very clearly AI written in the worst possible way. Responses are very formulaic, get hung up on details nobody cares about (like a lamp hanging somewhere for 4 years), it often makes zero sense and is very, very unclear when it comes to the objectives. Especially when trying to advance the plot.
I have not played this before the rewrite, but the fact that the writing that I experienced is an improved version over the original, is troubling.
I hope this will improve in the future, so I will keep an eye on the project, but it seems an uphill battle.
Im french and my english is bad so i try to play the game but its hard to understand what to do and how i can continue the game because I dont really understand everythink
You have to follow the ladder of it, it gives you hints and warns you when you are in risk of changing to normal one, first step is tricking Chad into not knowing how you grew
so finally finished the game (until the end of both dom and normal routes) at least, and probably the few things i have to say:
the dialogue is... rough to say the least, sometimes it's perfectly understandable, other times i understand what it's going for even though it doesn't quite click, and the rest of the time it just genuinely feels like it's complete nonsense and not really relevant to whatever is going on?
gameplay was a bit tough to understand at first, but eventually got the hang of it (learning that not increasing your height doesn't advance the route and consequently gives you more time to go for upgrades, farm money and etc, was genuinely game-changing)
gym just seems useless? apart from a couple requirements on the route, going there or not doesn't seem to have much of an effect on scenes or the character overall
same for the tailor, she has a BE route and apparently once that finishes you can accept her offer or not, but not really sure what it does? and her options don't seem to matter much either, + taking the BE doses yourself doesn't seem to do anything as well
pearl's side route feels a bit too demanding sometimes, the dose requirement increase feels like it's way too high, and you kinda gotta just ignore it until you have enough to continue (and what you get in return from the trades feels pretty mediocre ngl)
that's what comes to mind, overall i still think it's a pretty interesting game, and it's got some really cool ideas, just needs some polish overall
Right now I'm polishing dialogue, it's not gonna have a 100% consistent story or be withouth some plot holes but it should be a lot more understandable and a decent enough story
A part of the rewrite is giving the gym a reason to exist apart from the normal requirements.
Tailor, mink and others are meant as secondary quests for you to entertain yourself while working towards Chad, and Pearl was soriginallt meant to be finished in part 2 but decided to drop the whole thing here, she will have a continuation there tho, thank you for the feedback and appreciate it.
You just have to buy everything from Alchemy shop and then doing all steps you gets like 6-8 Doses each craft (when you restock mats). You can starve first days, but selling each dose gives huge amount of cash in first days, that you are fast on big money track.
On other hand. Dunno how to push Mayor branch, that later appear on Pearl route.
Dialogue should be a lot better now, its not the best nor is it the final version but it should be a lot more understandable, some changes to the story that bring mroe protagonism to the gym
Not sure if bugged but I'm at 2/5 and can't make the clearance it shows "A clearance still wants [short_]." I've tried buying everything I can and nothing I do will let it progress.
I'm gonna add it, I'm rewriting the game so that a priority and Patreon will get download 6 days before, the rewrite will still be up here at the same time, but it's not done yet.
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really enjoyed it
If it wasn't for the ugly Ai imagery and corny dialogue i might have considered this a actual game . When again probably not.
For myself in particular, given my "contribution" to the game, it was interesting to see what Goddess Maker's Allia, Celine, and Freda characters would look like when run into an AI generation model that transforms them in stages based on their first form.
Freda in particular is amusing because she was not intended to keep her shrimp form as she ascends, but rather be all sexy and busty in a crime boss kimono, paralleling somewhat to her younger sister, Marissa’s, body.
Is not that deep dawg.
I can recommend you actual books if you wanna read or when it comes to indie video games with rich story check out Fear and hunger, Blasphemous , Darkest dungeons , Pathologic and the list goes on. ( No Ai included)
I think people are dogging on the writing too much, acting like a handful of awkward translations renders the whole thing unintelligible.
Well it's built on a good foundation, my foundation...
Given all the comments of bad writing, it’s making me feel a sort of parental obligation that I should rewrite it myself since pretty much everything else apart from the AI art assets is my work.
A counterfeit Goddess Maker should at least be competent to read, even if it does take shortcuts, especially as this diverging project remains associated with my own.
So my offer of reconciliation is you let me handle the coding and writing, and you can develop the art coinciding with the plot structure you have in mind.
It'll probably be for the best to play to our strengths.
I'm guessing that this is translated right?... "Come in properly, you're letting the road in." I'm sorry the what?
partially because im not a native english speaker, partially because this wasnt a very well planned project and went through a few dozen big changes in story, partially cus first iterations of dialogue were almost fully ai written, its got a bit of an absolute mess of a dialogue even after a lot of manual rewriting, future stuff is a lot more planned so it shouldnt have such issues, Writing has always been and still is its weakest point by far and Ive spent a ton more time fixing stuff than I wouldve if I knew how to do it properly in the first place.
Ill fix that one up and go through another skim to try to find others, I prioritized main characters when rewriting so hopefully those have a better standard.
Thanks for the feedback.
I mean no offense sorry if it came off that way it was more just a joke. But totally looking forward to how the game comes along.
I take no offense to it, it can hurt a bit but not because of what you said, more so because its true, dont worry ive gotten a lot worse and I appreciate a lot any feedback people can bring, since I actually want to continue improving this (you wouldnt believe how bad first version was), if youve got any other please let me know, and thank you.
So I'm pretty lost on what exactly happened in the dom route. Like what exactly caused the thing that happened to chad to happen? I never made the cannister (I don't remember making it) and somehow I still get the dom ending with chad getting the same result if I had made it. Then they say she'll just undo it, I think, but then nothing happens after that.
there was a bit of a mess with dom route having combined with normal there, shrink cannister is not needed in it, in very rough words you just drain chad of all shes got, but your body cant sustain it so you just have fun while it lasts, ive already fixen up 2 or 3 scenes that got mixed up there but thats another one that needs fixing, Dom route got added like on the side of normal route so its the one with the most complaints and most issues, id be thankful if you told me what other places were confusing.
I got that you drain her, but like why does she get drained? It kinda comes out of nowhere with no build up to explain why it happens
I see, I had added a bit of a buildup a few mins ago with the girlfriend mentioning how she seems to loose a bit of what she gained during growth, you getting some growth from her in certain scenes and rex also growing off of her and such, so, she kind of is a kind of a huge well of growth, who has a certain amount of almost subconcious control over her growth and its transmission, it also makes her a lot more impulsive the bigger she gets, the idea was that because of the events that happened beforehand she kind of just let you subconsiously suck it all out, you have been asserting control over her, but your body doesnt have the capacity (yet) to hold all of it, things like the training programme and the research were so you can artificially atune yourself to the growth but it doesnt match hers and so you cant keep it, its definitely a bit obscure, I focused more on the "sexyness" of the scene rather than a fully logical sysem there specially because dom route is more built onto the normal one, its meant to be an alternative route but ill add this to the list of issues and think something up.
Thank you for the feedback.
Ah, I see. I remember seeing the mentions of Rex also growing. I just figured that was like an additional effect of having sex with Chad, her cum causing people to grow as well when inside them and not that it was Chad giving away some of her growth/size in the process. I can see what you mean now though.
Well she gives it away by the "fluids" but it has different effect depending on the person and she has like I said an almost subconcious control of it, ill expand more on how it all works on later parts, its not meant to be all discovered rn
I am so confused for the whole game. I was doing the dom route and when asked to make the thing that reverses her the topmost option was to brew a supressant cannister and there was not a single option to do at the board anymore. Then Candie was there and it seems like I lost and then immedately after I somehow had the thing that reverses her? I think it's very confusing adn the wording of the dialogue doesn't help that one bit
Ahhh, there is indeed a confusing way which is that if you fail a condition on the Dom route you get taken to the normal route and we'll the dialogue is from the normal route so it's gonna make less sense
Also made me realize that I fucked up on a lot of the options menus and skipped part of the convos by accident. both should now be fixed, it was indeed merging weirdly into normal route
I did end up draining chad in the same run though, I don't think I switched over to the regular run. I think I am more confused by trying to make the supressant and then it telling me I never used any because I don't have them somehow even tough I am sure I made a bunch of them
I can't for the life of me figure out how to research "Raise the limit" in the regular path. I don't have any research options at the bench, and I only have the usual recipes (suppressant, regular, super, bust) in the Brew menu.
Have you gotten the Chad events?
All of the ones leading up to that point, I think. The most recent one was "Thursday", the one where Chad blows it onto the player.
But I don't get any options to research "Raise the limit" and thus automatically get the fail route in the next encounter.
Ok I'll check out oft here is a softlock or if something isn't clear there, if you send me your save id appreciate it to narrow it down
Have you finished the gym too?
I feel crazy but I think I've given the mob lady 200-300 brews and she still has two more forms to go. How many brews does she need?
Shouldn't take that ill check it out
they trigger after the brews AND a few days after chad's rematch make sure youve got both
when do you plan to upload a downloadable version?
Uhhh. I forgor, gimme a few hours and it'll be uploaded
fair nough lol
Do you think you could lock certain images like the bathroom scene till characters reach the size in the images? feels weird to see them tall when in game they are really short.
I'll look into it
Uploading the save file does not give you the CGs you have already seen with the current update from what I could see.
Should be fixed
How do you get to the second ending in Normal? I've beaten Dom, but I don't how how to finish Normal without using suppressant. Or am I supposed to just not make suppressant for several weeks?
just don't make one. you can research it just don't brew a canister.
That doesn't seem to be possible? I tried Research > brew nothing > completely empty out the shelf (like the branch where Chad regrows), but your partner still secretly brews a suppressant anyways and you have to use it. And if I don't research then the scene never triggers, unlike Dom route where I could skip the research?
Oddly, I ended up getting the ending through the scene viewer after getting the above again, which DID acknowledge I had no suppressants in inventory.
well that's a bug, just like it's still not possible to lose the rematch as the boost from the day before puts you at 198cm hopefully it will get fixed in time
Should be fixed
Should be fixed
Do you think you can make a height chart based on days ?
Height doesn't exactly change per day, it depends on at what height you trigger Chad and when, but one of the things I'll add is a global height chart
just finished the game with the dominant rounte and it was amazing
Can you add tips on what to do next and unlock new potions
Could you make a downloadable version? It's really laggy on my browser
its downloadable on patreon but ill upload the files here within 3 days from now
I finally finished the game, and overall, I liked it
. The fetish content was great and particularly I love that this game has hyper content - games that focus on fmg usually doesn’t have a giantess the size of a building and it is very rare to see the combination of fmg + gts+ futa in a fetish game.As for AI images, they are not perfect but pretty decent for a passion project and also there is a lot of CG and that is great. Also there is still too much of horrible AI writing, which makes it difficult to understand what is going on. Sometimes, because of AI writing, instructions of what to do next are unclear. The writing needs to be redone because any human-made writing would be better than AI.
Overall, this project is great, it is great that the dev is trying to diverge from the Goddess Maker and to create something unique and I would love to see how massive characters will grow in next parts but for now part 1 needs a lot of polishing and a full replacement of AI writing.
Also here are some suggestions that came to my mind:
I wish all the best for the developer and I hope that this project won’t be abandoned and will be brought to completion because it has a lot of potential
Thank you, those are all things I'm working towards and hope future versions accomplish
how do I make super serums
its say i lose but i dont have any other dialogue i need to restart all the game ?
and i wonder if their any traducted version because its kinda hard to understand how i can grow up when its say 2meter max i dont know if someone can help me
Im.making game clearer but if you loose, you don't actually loose, it's just a bad ending, you can continue playing the game but you will get different scenes if you win
I really liked the gameplay and CGs.
hope Rax gets bigger in future updates <3.
My browser can't play this game embedded, can you add a downloadable version please?
It's promising, the idea is great, the activities pretty fun, and the growth is nicely done for purely AI images.
But the writing is very bad. It is very clearly AI written in the worst possible way. Responses are very formulaic, get hung up on details nobody cares about (like a lamp hanging somewhere for 4 years), it often makes zero sense and is very, very unclear when it comes to the objectives. Especially when trying to advance the plot.
I have not played this before the rewrite, but the fact that the writing that I experienced is an improved version over the original, is troubling.
I hope this will improve in the future, so I will keep an eye on the project, but it seems an uphill battle.
Yep, it was a lot worse before, I'm still rewriting it but I preferred to release several updates during the days than 1 every 2 weeks
I got stuck in "Let the schedule run twice"- any advice? I spent like a month and still nothing happened.
do you have enough suppressing canisters it's 1 per week.
for the scene after you need to not have any or regular height doses for 2 weeks
Still doesn't work :(
Im french and my english is bad so i try to play the game but its hard to understand what to do and how i can continue the game because I dont really understand everythink
If u can make a translatet version for french people that will be Amazing
sorry, im making the english clearer but I dont know french at all so it would be pretty hard.
Is it supposed to be impossible to sleep with the GF at a certain point?
It says I'm at 2/10 with her and I have no idea how to fix it? I can't spend time with her cuz the button is permanently greyed out.
Even in the lab one? I'll fix it in a few hours
how can you be under 1.98 M for the rematch when you needed to be 2.95 M 6 story sections ago or nothing will progress?
Fixed
can you make downloadable version? Online is very laggy for me.
ill upload the downloadable version in a few days
great update so far,
1 nice thing to add would being able to multi buy once you get the 10,000s of dollars from pearl
how do i make the limit higher than 3 meters and get to the dominant route ?
You have to follow the ladder of it, it gives you hints and warns you when you are in risk of changing to normal one, first step is tricking Chad into not knowing how you grew
oh okay ty , I guess I’ll have to start over then bc I haven’t done that , there is also probably a way to get big fast
so finally finished the game (until the end of both dom and normal routes) at least, and probably the few things i have to say:
that's what comes to mind, overall i still think it's a pretty interesting game, and it's got some really cool ideas, just needs some polish overall
Right now I'm polishing dialogue, it's not gonna have a 100% consistent story or be withouth some plot holes but it should be a lot more understandable and a decent enough story
A part of the rewrite is giving the gym a reason to exist apart from the normal requirements.
Tailor, mink and others are meant as secondary quests for you to entertain yourself while working towards Chad, and Pearl was soriginallt meant to be finished in part 2 but decided to drop the whole thing here, she will have a continuation there tho, thank you for the feedback and appreciate it.
Personally i found Pear demands quite easy.
You just have to buy everything from Alchemy shop and then doing all steps you gets like 6-8 Doses each craft (when you restock mats). You can starve first days, but selling each dose gives huge amount of cash in first days, that you are fast on big money track.
On other hand.
Dunno how to push Mayor branch, that later appear on Pearl route.
The mayor branch is not done yet
Dialogue should be a lot better now, its not the best nor is it the final version but it should be a lot more understandable, some changes to the story that bring mroe protagonism to the gym
Not sure if bugged but I'm at 2/5 and can't make the clearance it shows "A clearance still wants [short_]." I've tried buying everything I can and nothing I do will let it progress.
i have no idea what i'm doing.
Im making things clearer in the game RN
I might just be dumb low-key.
How do i get to the BE potions / super serum? Ive done five re runs and still have figured it out yet...
Hey bossman, make sure you're taking plenty of breaks. And if anyone gives you crap for it , tell them off. You're making gold here.
Thank you, I like to develop it and so it doesnt get that tiring but ill keep in mind not to get burnt out
is there a way to get to stage 5 I'm stuck on 4/5 and beat the game?
The game is beaten after Chad stops being an issue, part 2 will expand on that but part 1 still need refinement before that
it would be nice if after you complete something in the ladder you could still see it (or click toggle) how to do it for replays while scene hunting.
I'll add that, I'm focusing on the writing rn but I'll do that just after
Its added
Please consider adding a downloaded version.
I'm gonna add it, I'm rewriting the game so that a priority and Patreon will get download 6 days before, the rewrite will still be up here at the same time, but it's not done yet.